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SERIE 1 - Eryna by Tsukiiyo SERIE 1 - Eryna by Tsukiiyo

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I'm happy to present to you Eryna and a new serie which will show you some character of my story (yay, this  is a new project !! :la:)


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Time : 10 hours
Software : Photoshop CS6
Tablet : Wacom Bamboo Fun Pen & Touch A5


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:iconsefikichi:
She's got flair, she's got sass, she's got attitude. The colours of the shapes flying around make me think of hearts, maybe she's a heartbreaker? ;)

I like the colours you chose for her outfit, the shadowing really makes her dress look like it has depth and shape. The dress colour also complements her skin colour well. Her pose is also very daring, combined with that mischievous look.

The anatomy of her upper body is a bit off though. The slope of her back looks a bit bumpy, it should be more of a ( shape. Compare to this photo for example. I'm having a hard time explaining what I mean, I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. :D

Did you design her clothing and jewellery yourself? They're so beautiful! :)

Thank you for sharing this with :iconsharpenededge:
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Okay so I'll start with the things I like :P
The colors, most specifically on the dress
Reflective light is nice, and i like how the trim on the upper part of the dress has folds into it making it look more believable and adding a sense of fabric onto it.

Another thing I like is how the cloth shes holding starts to fade out of focus, looks cool and creates a little bit of flow that leads the eye back to her face.

I also like the expression on her face and as Sefikichi mentioned she does have some sassiness haha

Onto other things though! I do notice the anatomy on the upper body is off

The deltoid (shoulder muscle) is kind of distorted and also the torso is a little bit too wide, the muscles don't really fit.. there isn't one definite problem
It's just a little bit of everything
Here's what I mean 0:
i.imgur.com/Qj07zFD.png

I know the pose is a little different, my rendition of the body is just kinda blankly standing there but I believe it still illustrates a point!

The muscles/anatomy is what forms the shape of the body, that's why a lot of people say knowing it is vital, even if you only know simplified forms
And I agree, it does help!

Here's a few things that have helped me, actually!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7W6f_…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=CssitS…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=CssitS…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=hsUB6p…

I recommend drawing along with these, saving what you make, and using it for reference when you're having some trouble

If you're anything like me I know these things might seem a bit too over the top or overwhelming, but they really do help in the long run and once you start it's not as complicated as it seems. Things start to make sense about how they work together and you might start even recognizing some things from real people you didn't see before.

The biggest thing in my opinion is you just have to think about these things and how things connect while drawing!

They also have a ton of other helpful stuff if you end up checking out those youtube links.
Hope I helped
I look forward to future art from you!
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RevanRayWan Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015   Digital Artist
J'arrive après tout le monde mais... Hâte d'en voir plus sur ce projet !
Le mouvement du voile est cool ! *_* Serait-ce un voile de deuil ?
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, vaut mieux tard que jamais !! :D
Merci ! J'espère pouvoir développer d'autres illus de ce style sur mon histoire dans les mois à venir ^^

le voile de deuil, je n'y avait pas penser, mais ce n'est pas idiot ^^
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RevanRayWan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015   Digital Artist
Héhé oui et comme ça, ça me fait un paquet de choses à voir pour quand peu à peu les vacances vont s'installer et qu'il y aura moins de posts (ou peut-être qu'il y en aura plus..?) :D
D'ailleurs, ce personnage fait partie de ta BD ?
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, non, ma BD parlera d'elfes !! ^^
Ma princesse fait partie d'une autre histoire, bien plus ancienne, mais que je garde de côté pour... un jour 8D Quand j'aurais du skill !
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:iconrevanraywan:
RevanRayWan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015   Digital Artist
:-) C'est cool ! garde ton imagination fertile ! :-)
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merco n_n
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:iconkaedegirl:
Kaedegirl Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
j'aime beaucoup :D :D :D :D :D elle est belle et la couleur est très belle aussi :D 
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mercii !! :D
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:icondeviljunter:
Deviljunter Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015
OUAIS!!! Ma princesse préférée!!! >W<

C'est moi où tu l'as représentée plus mature?
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Je ne sais pas, elle me paraît avoir le même âge partout xD
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:icondeviljunter:
Deviljunter Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015
C'est peut être ton style qui a changé mais... ici je la trouve plus mature que sur les premiers dessins =p
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:iconmllemew:
MlleMew Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Elle est très jolie, les couleurs sont supers harmonieuses ^^
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merciiii !! Un jour, promis, je ferai un tuto pour faire des couleurs harmonieuses !! ;)
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:iconamarna:
Amarna Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG elle dechireeeeeeeeee !!!
Elle est super belle et j'adore son expression
La chevelure est trop belle comme d'hab (ce mouvement <3)
Le painting est juste delirant tu geres trop
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaaah, merciiii ♥
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:iconamarna:
Amarna Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tu vas en faire plein d'autre ???
Reav <3 ?
Ca fait longtemps qu'on la pas vu lui 
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Vouii !!
Vouiiiii *A*
Olalala, je vais en faire plein, mais... Patience è_é
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:iconamarna:
Amarna Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
J'attendraiiiiiiiiii !!! Le jour et la nuitttttttt !!!
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lool, bonne chance
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:icondaegann:
Daegann Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Elle est super ! J'aime beaucoup son sourire et ses cheveux. Et les texture de sa robe son hyper bien fait !
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci, j'ai bien bossé dessus alors !! xD
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:iconphyphydi:
phyphydi Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015   General Artist
Magnifique <3
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci ♥
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ArisT0te Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015   Digital Artist
La composition est plutôt bien, le visage et la coiffure sont bien, par contre ya de petits soucies sur l'anatomie ( le seins et l'épaule devrait être relié et les proportions du bras, trop court ) mais dans l'ensemble le rendu global est agréable à voir :) les couleurs sont très bien ;)

bonne chance pour ton projet :)
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bah chepa... Et la notion de perspective ? Oo'
Bref xD Merci ^^  
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:iconctenaid:
CTenaid Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Trop classe l'effet du voile!

J'adore sa coiffure et son expression ^0^
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merciii !! :D
Surtout que l'expression... Elle n'étais pas top au départ !! haha
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:iconctenaid:
CTenaid Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah?! et bien t'as su la rattraper ;)
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
merci ^^
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:iconcapitaineblue:
CapitaineBlue Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Allez, courage pour ce nouveau projet ! ^_____^ J'adore son visage !!!
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci !! Je ne sais pas quand je vais continuer, mais bon, l'espoir fait vivre !! lol
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CapitaineBlue Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Il ne faut pas espérer, il faut se forcer pour s'y mettre ! Et une fois que tu t'y es mise, ça va comme sur des roulettes (si t'es dans une bonne phase, sinon, faut vraiment pas se forcer ^^) ;)
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, le soucis étant que je dois :
- finir mes gifts
- commencer à bosser pour la potentiel BD
- faire 2 concours qui me plaise

Q.Q
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:iconcapitaineblue:
CapitaineBlue Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Commence par ce que tu préfères. C'est la seule règle ^w^
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:icontsukiiyo:
Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Certes, mais il faut que je m'organise, sinon, je m'éparpille è_è
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CapitaineBlue Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
C'est sûr ^^
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VeKKat Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015   Digital Artist
C'est superbe ma belle :love: *mode fan *v* *

J'ai hâte de voir ce que tu vas nous montrer :la:
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Tsukiiyo Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci !! Q.Q
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